SierraR

Post your persuasive essay here. Why kids need more independence! BY: Sierra Reddi [a kid] Can you imagine a child growing up asking for help every five minutes? I TRY NOT TO. That’s why I think that it is important for children to be more independent. I also think that because… If kids are more independent, it would help out parents. It would help hem out because, parents won’t need to keep reminding kids about unfinished schoolwork, or schoolwork that is due soon. There would also be no need to walk kids to the bus-stop. No need to pack lunches for kids. Although most parents enjoy doing these things for kids, it will help… Kids get ready for the future! If kids are independent they will know how it feels to wok hard, like an adult. Kids will learn that In the future, you have to take care of yourself. We would understand how it feels to do when we are older. Like when you’re older, if you procrastinate there will be bigger consequences than just losing recess. But, there is one opposing view in this situation, KIDS // COULD // GO “OVERBOARD”. When I say this I mean that kids could do stuff like talk back to parents or //try// to decide their own bedtime. But if they/you try to do this, they/you are not truly independent. Like, adults that have work the next day, don’t go to sleep at eleven because they are responsible. And being responsible is something you need to be if you want to be independent. But, if kids will be more experienced if they are independent. They/we will unravel the mysteries of life on our own. Not all things for we are still just children. We will learn how to be independent! So, ask yourself, [again] that question I asked you in the beginning. Can you imagine that? Still, I TRY NOT TO!!! THINGS THAT KIDS CAN DO TO BE MORE INDEPENDENT!!! Check it on the dot PACK YOUR OWN LUNCH. FINISH SCHOOL WORK ON your own. BE MORE RESPONSIBLE. DO THINGS WITHOUT REMINDERS. BE A HARD WORKER. LISTEN. BE HELPFUL. DEPEND ON YOURSELF.